Tuesday, January 09, 2007

Raisa

Hi, my name is Raisa. I am 16 years old. I am in Toronto to learn to speak English better. In Brazil I am student and I am in my third year of high school. I like to read books and magazines, go to the shopping center, watch comedies and I like all kinds of sport.

At the time I`m in Canada I want to know new places and met friends. Next year when I`m going to university I intend to study medicine but I`m not so sure about it because it is a hard work and I don`t know if I will like to see blood and others things.

1 Comments:

Blogger Mark Midensky said...

Please do not use contractions in written work:

I've I have
I'm I am
I'd I would

This work is very short and you need to do more work. Please finish writing your first journal on Consumer Complaints.

You need to also write a journal about Continuiing Education, Night School, or some other kind of hobby class.

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