When I was child...........
Before I entered the elementary school I was a cry baby. After I finished kindergarden when my mom was not home from work, I would never enter the home even I knew where key is because at the moment I believed in ghosts, so I would not enter the house alone.
To be honest I am scared of ghost until now, but I am less scared of ghost than people who try to hurt me with words. As soon as I knew that my mom would not be home. To called my mom, I began crying at the opposite wall of 1 floor door.
At the moment mom was playing some game which is very popular among wives and can reduce risk of dementia with friends. Mom had to rush into me instead of playing game. For my bad habit to changed, my family tried but all of ways fault.
1year later, I met girlfriend I could change my bad habit.
-By Kang Rok
To be honest I am scared of ghost until now, but I am less scared of ghost than people who try to hurt me with words. As soon as I knew that my mom would not be home. To called my mom, I began crying at the opposite wall of 1 floor door.
At the moment mom was playing some game which is very popular among wives and can reduce risk of dementia with friends. Mom had to rush into me instead of playing game. For my bad habit to changed, my family tried but all of ways fault.
1year later, I met girlfriend I could change my bad habit.
-By Kang Rok
posted by Mark Midensky at 4:00 PM
1 Comments:
Good work. Try to check a few spellling mistakes before I do the final correction. You are a good student.
Mark
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